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Chapter One
Where It Began...

They kissed passionately, in a evilly dark way. Alone in the moonlight with only wolfs howls in the distance. Shadows surrounded them, not daring to take their eyes of each other. Touching one anothers body playfully, not wanting to separate. Beneath the stars they stood, with only the stars shine lighting the way. They kissed again. What seemed like the longest moment in their lives was over in mere minutes. Throughout the night they continued, pleasurably kissing one another as the night went on....  

the following year...

The young boy stood before the female, his mother. Panting heavily, the boy stood before her. Outside the boy appeared fine, but inside he drowned in pain and sorrow. Light, faint tears shed from his eyes as the pain grew inside him. Quickly again the female struck, forcefully knocking the youngster down. The boy cried in pain as he pleaded her to stop. Battered and bruised the boy lay. Little drops of blood surrounded his body. The mother moved closer to her young, demanding he move his feeble body from the ground. When the boy did not obey she raise her right leg, revealing one of her dark blue boots from under her dress. Lunging in at the young male, over and over she kick his stomach. His insides screaming from the pain he held inside him. After a few blows she stopped. She left, leaving behind what was meant to be her son.....

With so many questions inside his little head, the boy just wanted an answer to why. Why was be treated badly by his parents. Was he bad without realising it, was he misbehaving without noticing. Why was all he wanted to know....

Without noticing his so called father crept in behind him. Bursts of pain emerged from the youths back. He rolled over, seeing his father stand over him grinning evilly. Just as the boy thought all his troubles were over, a whole new world of pain and torture was just beginning. With his forceful fists the adult male lay into the boy. He attacked the boy in every way possible. Once done the father summoned forth his demon claws and struck the boy. He attacked the boys right eye. He stabbed his claws into the boys black fur and dragged them across, leaving the boys right eye with a painful scar. The young boy bled, blood flowed down his face and onto the floor beneath him. The father left smiling, obviously he didn’t mind what he had just done to his son. The boy lay crying....

As the male left he was soon encountered by a lovely female. Their lips came in contact, their bodies stood close. Their lips parted.  She licked the blood that stained his face, drip by drip. He gave her a devilish grin, then pulled her in for another kiss....
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Ok this is chapter one in a new thing I'm gonna start writing about. It's basically about my character carla the demon bat and her family. Each member of the family have their own backgrounds and stories to tell.

Chapter 1 is basically to show their parents and what kind of people they are like. I choose to put motzart in this because he was their first child and he helps to show how they treated their children.

For people who do not know any of my characters this will help. Look in my gallery for pictures of them.

Dracu and Zara are the parents.
Motzart is their son and carla's older brother.
Zaka is their son and carla's little brother.
Carla is their daughter and is zaka and motzart's sister.

All these characters belong to me^^
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wow that is very disturbingly scarry
very nicely written^^

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thankyou^^

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youwelcome^^:glomp:

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my true love ~Invader-Tanner :smooch:
"That day, all female officers will be required to wear TINY MINI-SKIRTS!!!!!" -Roy Mustang:D
^^ :hug:

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Do it all today, because you might not tomorrow.
thankyou^^

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so who was the boy that was getting beat up?

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I am the shadows
no one knows I exsiest
no one knows I am here
I am the protector of the earth
as long as I live none will harm the earth
the boy was motzart

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Do it all today, because you might not tomorrow.

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